This week Jaren's First Grade class read the book TheAprilRabbits by David Cleveland.
The kids were encouraged to write their own version of this story. Click here to read Jaren's story AprilFrogs.
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Jaren, you are a creative and thoughtful writer! I loved reading your story. I especially loved the disco dancing frogs! They were my favorite. Good luck in all you do! I look forward to reading your published work one day soon!
Jaren, What a wonderful story. I love frogs and I love reading about them. You did a great job. I really like the dico frogs too..and the dragon breathing fire was an awesome ending.
Hi Jaren. Are you enjoying the snow today? Cool, huh. What a wonderful frog story! I loved it - especially the disco frogs - love those dancing frogs! And, of course, you worked your favorite dragon into your story. It was great. See you on Easter! Love you. Grammy XXOO
Hi Jaren! What a great story, I really enjoyed it! I had my daughter (she's 10) come look at your awesome dragon...they are her favorite thing ever! She said he was COOL!
Are those frogs in the last sentence doing the dishes or doing the disco!? Either way -- what a great idea. Let's put those frogs to work, either as housekeepers or entertainers. :D I love your story -- great job.
10 comments:
Jaren, you are a creative and thoughtful writer! I loved reading your story. I especially loved the disco dancing frogs! They were my favorite. Good luck in all you do! I look forward to reading your published work one day soon!
Awesome story Jaren!! You have a great imagination!
Excellent story Jaren - I really enjoyed the pictures.
Continue writing, you have a wonderful talent!
~mygems
Jaren,
What a wonderful story. I love frogs and I love reading about them. You did a great job. I really like the dico frogs too..and the dragon breathing fire was an awesome ending.
Hi Jaren. Are you enjoying the snow today? Cool, huh. What a wonderful frog story! I loved it - especially the disco frogs - love those dancing frogs! And, of course, you worked your favorite dragon into your story. It was great. See you on Easter! Love you.
Grammy XXOO
Hey Jaren, did the dragon eat the frogs on the last page?!?! Awesome story. You did a great job writing and spelling those words!
Hey Jaren!
You are such good story teller! The pictures you drew are great!
Maybe someday you can write a Gremo story and I can add it to my “stories, writing and pictures from the Boyz. Collection”
Love ya much,
Gremo
Jaren, you are quite the fantastic author and illustrator! My favorite is the picture of the fire-breathing dragon. Keep up the good work!
Nikki
Hi Jaren! What a great story, I really enjoyed it! I had my daughter (she's 10) come look at your awesome dragon...they are her favorite thing ever! She said he was COOL!
Keep up the awesome work!
Dear Jaren,
Are those frogs in the last sentence doing the dishes or doing the disco!? Either way -- what a great idea. Let's put those frogs to work, either as housekeepers or entertainers. :D I love your story -- great job.
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